Passion

[Noctivagus]

Passion

I have mixed feelings,
I have mixed dreams,
I have mixed hopes.
After all, I am only human.

I wish this day would come soon,
I really don't want to leave,
But alas my fate as come,
I wish it didn't have to be this way.

My heart and soul shall live on in you're memories,
Never forget the love I give or send,
Just as I shall never forget the love I receive,
One heart... one soul... one dream... one fate.

All of these have a connection in life,
Memories can be full of joy or sorrow,
This will all come to a end,
My dream... my hope... my reality.

In dreams, my fate is to watch over you from afar,
I hope you realise you are my heart, my sou,l my life... my everything.

As one life ends another begins, perhaps this is my fate.

Aishite Imasu

Noctivagus
=2005=

[Minako]

Nice. Simple and to the point. (You should enter the poetry contest XD) A nice dreamy kind of theme. I would suggest breaking up some of your longer lines into 2... it might flow better that way. Like "I have mixed hopes after all, I am only human." could be split like "I have mixed hopes /(newline) after all, I am only human."

I don't have time to write in all of your threads (maybe next time just put them all in one?)... but I will sometime later. I like your stuff. ^_^.